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TCI Chapter 30: His Breaking Sanity

As you may notice, this Chapter has been cut into different parts. Mostly, I would describe this chapter as a rather emotional one. This highlights the conflicting emotions that Shin is undergoing. This also shows a bit of the development between Ryou and Miharu. I like stiffening the competition even just for a little bit. keke

REPLIES:

___cahaya - As always, thank you for the oh-so-detailed comment. XD I hope you don't get tired of waiting for updates of this story,

___simpleangel - I'm still stiffening the competition between Ryou and Shin. I mean, come on, what's a good love story without a complicated love triangle? XD

___betty_7_30 - Ehh? Are you on Ryou's side? haha Most of the readers vouch for Shin.

___disasterous_x - Thank you! Glad you like my story! You're sick? Tsk, tsk... Hope you get well soon! Nice to meet you to Aeriel, I'm Dia! XD

___pkv - Whoah... Wait a minute. Kill Ryou already? That would start a mafia war! (on facebook?) keke Nope, not yet... Shin is not yet out to kill the heir of their rival gang. Just a little test from ol' Ojii-sama. =)

___teresaa- - Yep, Ryou is sinister. If you recall on the first few chaps, Ryou was the smart wuss in Class 3-D who's part of the top ten within their year level. Oh, and of course, a jealous Shin is HOT. XD

___miss_dolly - A love-hate relationship? Yep, I think that's accurate enough to describe Miharu and Ryou's relationship. hehe

___nalouche - I love you, too! XDDD Ehh? You're on Ryou's side now? How about Shin? hehe Don't worry, Ryou won't give up on her that easily. I assure you that. =)

___Princess_Wincyy - Yes, Shin is killing. And of course, MY Taiki is as adorkable as always! XD

___leighannechan - Thank you! Glad you like my updates! Are they worth waiting for? hehe Yes, there are going to be more Miharu and Shin moments. Omo... Looks like you're a solid Shin and Miharu fan! Why don't you give Ryou a chance? Huh? Huh? Huh? Come on! *smiles*

___shushshuckspui - Yep, Shin's eyes is really blue, not mere contacts. hehe For now, Shin is going to continue posing as the heir. And, to clarify, Shin isn't part of the police. Technically, he's working undercover so yes, he can still be part of the gang. =) Hope that helped.

___mangoes_ - Ehh? You think he's going to make Shin kill Kenta? NO WAY! I've got future plans for Kenta! He hasn't proven himself capable of fighting yet! And he still doesn't have a love life! Why would I make Shin kill him??? keke

___cookielover - You've been added to the PM List! Good luck on guessing who's who! XD

_____cherry-apple-wine - hahahaha! That was funny! Can't believe you were fan-girling while Ryou was worried of his family jewels breaking! XD Seriously, it would be such a huge waste if he isn't able to bear children. Equation: looks + brains + hotness - reproductive means = WASTE!!! Agree? keke
"Taiki however is a petal of a different flower. Ha had to dress up like a girl? @__@" THIS. I would have to agree! Whenever I write, I notice that Taiki comes out every time my brain goes haywire or something... He's like the product of a topsy-turvy brain! haha
"Do I sense some jealousy in there? Yes, I believe my jealousy-radar is going crazy when I read that! Come on Shin! Succumb to the dark temptations within your heart! You know you want Miharu to be with you and ONLY with you! You want her for yourself! When are you going to realize and acknowledge that, when you’ve finally lost her?" Oh, Shin will realize that soon enough. keke And he's going to be forced to do something about it eventually. haha
"Love the end.
It’s just so, poetic for me. You know? I know I sound like a total psychopath right now but Im not! I swear! Im normal (alright maybe not that normal) but I am sane. It’s just that I imagined the grandfather saying it so nonchalantly like saying ‘the weather’s nice today’.
So cool I say!" I don't think you're weird. haha I love that line, too. It's like... Everything's peaceful and we're having this normal conversation and then, he just says, "Ok, it's time for you to kill." XD Great minds think alike, don't you think?
"How do I show how much I love this story? Does the review shows how much I enjoy reading it? Or should I like send you a separate message telling you how great this story is XD" You're showing enough love already! I'm grinning every time I read your comment! XD Thank you so much for the support! Although I know this story isn't like the mainstream flood of fanfics on Soompi, I'm happy that there are readers who like it! XD
"Oh and you wish you’re male? I swear, you’d get along perfectly with my best friend. I can just see it now ^^" Believe it or not, in real life, you wouldn't expect me to be the type to write romance stories. I'm that boyish. I've been wishing I was born a guy since I was young. Weird enough? keke My parents are even having doubts about my real sexuality. T_T I bet your bestfriend is also boyish, right? The type to be suspected of being a lesbian? keke


Thank you so much for the comments and the continued support everyone! I can't believe I'm on the 30th chapter now and it's been more than a year since I started posting this story on Soompi! Now, this makes me wonder when I'm ever going to finish this one. LOL.


P.S.
I started posting TCI on other sites as well.
I hope this story gets good reviews from those sites as well.
I'm keeping my fingers crossed. =)


regards,
the nonviolent torturer,
shattered teadrops